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Blacklawn

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A good track. Simple, yet enjoyable. I just felt that the melody lingered somewhat, and could use a little more variability. That's just a personal preference, though.

I enjoyed it. The numb/somewhat apathetic atmosphere was coherent with the title. The melody is simple, as expected from tracks like this, and the instrument choice was also good. The reason why I'm not giving a higher rating is simply due to the fact that I enjoy more intense tracks in general, but good job, nonetheless.

My issue with this track is the way the melody progresses. I found it to be unfocused and somewhat chaotic. The melody doesn't always have to follow a perfectly defined scale, but in this case, I just couldn't tell what the notes were trying to convey. The different instruments also seem off-scale in relation to each other in several parts.

I did like the instrument choice/mixing, though.

CaducusAter responds:

I had a feeling that was a problem I had. I find complex progression stimulating, but I realize it can get chaotic if I'm not really careful. Will definitely try to work on that. Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it a lot.

Hello. I'm an engineer from Brazil. I also write sci-fi and make music as a hobby.

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